User talk:Kulindar

addition to Iraqi insurgency

Hello - thank you for your contribution, this is a very good start, I hope you add lots more to wikipedia over time. A couple of quick questions: is this entirely original material? (I'm only asking since this is a large chunk added at once, because of wikipedia copyright policy.) Next, and I don't mean this as a criticism, but could you possibly edit this to be more bland and with more references to sources? I could have a try at editing it, but I thought you might want a chance to have a go at it first. What I mean is stuff like "bloodthirsty and extreme", "highly unclear", "tied his star", "daring comeback", "huge success", "most dangerous city on Earth" - good polemic writing, but encyclopedias are supposed to be dry, boring and factual ;) Some of the things that might need sources/links: Zarqawi declared an alliance with bin Laden, casualty numbers, "According to U.S. sources...", "Marines commanders declared...", that kind of thing. All in all a very good job, though. ObsidianOrder 21:11, 6 May 2005 (UTC)